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Father's Words [Chapter One]"Vice captian! The enemy is surrounding our men at F3!"Father's Words [Chapter One] by ~twistedlittlesoul
"Send Squad 10 there immediately!"
"Unit A6 and D4 are down!"
"Get the Medic Squad down there and search for survivors!"
"Unit C9 has taken down the east side. They are now moving towards the north to help F3!"
"Have S4 back them up! And have Squad 10 join them!"
I watched the familiar orange triangles clash into the foreign white shapes, both colors losing triangles as quickly as they come.
"Vice Captain," one of the men called.
I was so focused on the monitor that I didn't realize the soldier who had placed a cup in front of me. I smelled the aroma of French vanilla and finally peeled my eyes away from the screen. He smiled and nodded to me as I noticed his existence.
"Drink up, vice C," he said, pointing to the cup. "You've been standing there giving orders since the crack of dawn."
"What kind of vice commander would I be if I relaxed while my men are dying out there?"
"I understand Vice Comm
Story I am writing called SeedThis is a story I am writing and I am not sure if this is the correct category so let me know if I should post it some place else.Story I am writing called Seed by ~INS0M
After reading my story a few times I have decided to edit the story a bit.
I have edited this intro to fit the new version of the story.
There are 5 known elements. 4 of these elements are able to be called upon from within after years of training on top of those who have received the mark. Light element is used to manipulate life force, dark element is used to improve upon ones strength and to empower weapons, Earth element is used for manipulating the earth and other natural inanimate objects, Heat element is used to manipulate fire and excite the energy around ones body, but the most elusive ability is the use of the blood element. Although the blood element is said to use the power of the soul and that it can improve the effectiveness of ones abilities this takes a toll on the body. Not many people know how to invoke b
Seed Chapter 1 island of fate REVISED/REWRITTENChapter 1Seed Chapter 1 island of fate REVISED/REWRITTEN by ~INS0M
Island of Fate. REVISED/REWRITTEN
So it seems to be another beautiful day out today The sky is a wonderful shade of blue and the clouds are soft and calm. It's too bad that I don't have anyone to share it with. Sure my parents are on the boat with me and my birthday is coming up tomorrow but on this big private yacht with no one around to talk to its just like being at home. You know its funny my parents think because we are going someplace "nice" for my birthday that this should be a joyous occasion that I should be happy. I can't help but to wonder if people who are so infatuated with their jobs could even comprehend what happiness is. Oh well. Not like my 16th birthday is going to be any different than any other day of the year after all. I guess I will go take a nap by the by the pool. Ha! See what I mean my parents have a freaking pool on a boat. If I wanted to swim in the pool I would do it at home. Whatever. Time for a nap.
Stop shaking my bed. I don't want to get up.
Going back home part 1She rested her head on the pillow looking outside the window. It was a beautiful and fairly cold night, a pretty unusual thing for the Fire Nation. She tried to close her eyes and fall asleep but it seemed impossible. After trying for a while she sighed and stood up rubbing her eye. She walked a little around the place she once called home until she reached the living room. She sat down on the couch and looked at the place. “Everything looks so empty… and old.”Going back home part 1 by ~Shippo3313
There had been five years since she ran away from that place but now that her father was imprisoned she decided to go and visit her mother’s grave one last time. So many things changed in her village. People left, and others came it wasn’t the same for sure but it was still the place where she grew up. The things and places that would usually bring back memories seemed to disappear, her nightmares weren’t there anymore. Knowing that her father couldn’t hurt her anymore did change things